I know you would like for me to provide more specific information related to what is needed to be done with your submission. To do that would require more time than I have. I did not assign a grade to your submission due to incompleteness of submission. In general you need to match requirements against Stage 1 requirements and rubric. Should you want full points there needs to be more details as to why and less discussion on what for example the Porter Model is. Information you provide needs to show your understanding of the information, relating it to the course matter and the case study. You provided references but very few stated references within the document. Do not list a reference if it is not reference able within the document. Very little information was provided for Generic Strategy, Strategic Business Area and Process to be improved. All sections should be highlighted for ease of identification. Improvement on the concerns raised in Feedback for Stage - 1 While looking at the present business positions, let us examine our fitness centers status through a Porters Five Forces Model, which would give us an actual scenario and would help us to come